Post by ~Ravenpaw~ on Jul 10, 2010 22:11:05 GMT -5
Ravendarus (Ravenpaw)
The Basics:
Name: Quietpaw
Nickname(s): Shy, Quiet
Age: 11 moons
Gender: she-cat
Clan: Moonclan
Rank: Apprentice
Apprentice: none
Mentor: open
Looks:
Body Type: She is a small greyish brown cat, with white paws. Her tail is small and thin, and her ears quite pointed, her tiny whiskers only add to her smallness. Quietpaw's eyes are a dark blue, almost grey. She had darker grey stripes with the greyish brown, her foreneck is also white, and she has four matching paws. She also has a tiny spot of white on her nose taking up half of it.
Pelt: ((Just read above))
Eye Color: Blueish grey.
Extras: none
Personality:
Likes:
- Friends
- Those who understand
- Exploring
Dislikes:
- Other's getting to close
- Cat's making fun of her
- fighting
Fears:
- being hurt
- Two-legs
Strengths:
- Able to make friends easy
- Very kind-hearted
Weaknesses:
- Scared easily.
- unable to talk
Family:
Mother: Hazeleye
Father: unknown
Sisters: none
Brothers: Whitepaw
Mate: none
Kits: none
History:
Where you are from: Clan
History:
Quietpaw was born in leafbare, she was born with a brother who’s name was Whitepaw, her mother had run out of milk and they both had to learn to eat fresh-kill early, which was a bit difficult because of their small teeth. During the 5th moon, her and her brother snuck out of camp to look for food, but the went to far and wander into Twoleg terrtory, where they attacked by Two-legs.
Now these weren't ordinary kid Twolegs, they were huge and scared the two kits. And they spoke such a strange tongue, they wobbled and held some sort of bottle in there paws. "L-lookie hic! At the cutteeeeee Hic! Kitties" One of the twolegs smiled wickedly he's foot swung out and hit Whitepaw, Quietpaw gasped "Leave my brother alone!" Quietpaw yowled at them, she was angry she leapt out and bit the twolegs foot. The twoleg yowled and knocked her off, Whitepaw hissed at the others, "Run Quietpaw" He yowled to her, Quietpaw shook her head, "I-I-I can't leave you" She meowed to him, only to be knocked away with incredible force. She slammed into the ground and rolled, until crashing into a nearby tree and was still afterwards. She groaned, her body momentarily immobilized in pain.
She opened her eyes only to see Whitepaw laying in the middle of the twolegs getting kicked everywhere, tears crusaded down her small face, Whitepaw started to stand, when the biggest twoleg smashed his bottle on Whitepaw's head, Whitepaw fell motionlessly laying in the pile of scattered glass. Quietpaw was outraged she got up and yowled louder then she has ever yowled before. The Twolegs looked at her, Quietpaw was by no means tall, but her presence was now larger than life. One of the Twolegs smiled and ran forward Quietpaw froze she had thought this far ahead, the other twolegs surrounded her she had no where to run. Suddenly pain filled her whole body has a fury of kicks paraded on her.
One of the Twolegs accidentally kicked her in the back of the neck, causing her to spit out blood, they left her laying there blood seeping out of her mouth. Quietpaw dragged herself over to her brother who lay there, forever silent. Quietpaw curled up beside him and laid there the whole night, till a warrior came for her, when the warrior asked for an explanation, he received nothing. He helped her back to camp after he buried Whitepaw. The medicine cat explained to Quietpaw's sad mother that, that one kick, had broken her vocal cords, and that she would forever be mute. From then on Quietpaw was always scared and shy, she didn't like the thought of living without her brother, but she eventually got used to it.