Post by ~Ravenpaw~ on Jul 18, 2010 23:47:13 GMT -5
Hello Everyone tis I Koyumi the death bringer, I am quite sorry I haven’t posted or anything, I was ground for like half the year and then I just lost my muse, I hope this story will bring it back, it was originally by my co-writer, but she quit on it so I am making major changes to it! I hope it is better then the last one because that is what I am aiming for!
Summary- The prophesy states that there is a new chosen one, and that she is to save the clans, and they're home. But she isn't all that's excepted, even though she's stronger, and a better hunter then any Thunderclan cat, faster then any Windclan cat, swim faster and catch fish better then any Riverclan cat, stealthier, more stubborn then any Shadowclan cat, jump higher and climb trees better then any Skyclan cat, and wise beyond those in Starclan, and even the Tribe of rushing water. But even with all these amazing skills that she had, she is just small kitten and seems really quite weak, not anything that they would have excepted, but Thunderclan takes her in and trains her like those of Starclan asked, but that is going to be harder then they thought. Not only must they train her they must also find the ten other’s that are going to help her with the task that has been placed before her, but that is going to be incredibly hard considering they are all apprentices!!
Clan list:
Thunderclan:
Leader: Silverstar
Deputy: Thundercloud (star)
Medicine cat: Greyeyes –apprentice- Chickenpaw
Warriors:
Blacktooth
Iceface
Dustear
Skyveiw
Clouddragon
Brightpelt
Owlfern
Hiddenstrike
Fadedglass
Queens:
Shadowdancer
Willowbranch
Dapplespot
Apprentices:
Poppypaw (heart)
Chickenpaw (wing)
Starpaw (night)
Smokepaw (fur)
Darkpaw (mask)
Kits:
Wildkit (paw, song, star)
Runningkit (paw, shadow)
Tigerkit (paw, nose)
Snowkit (paw, shoe)
Winterkit (paw, pelt)
Crowkit (paw, fur)
Windclan:
Leader: Fallenstar
Deputy: Hoperiver (star)
Medicine cat: Windstorm –apprentice- Rainpaw
Warriors:
Falcondrop
Farhills
Halfear
Spiritlight
Redwhisker
Iceraven
Jetstorm
Evercomet
Molestone
Sockmist
Queens:
Flowerwing
Windbreeze
Blackthunder
Apprentices:
Heavypaw (step)
Rainpaw (drop)
Blue (hill)
Willowpaw (print)
Later: Hollypaw (frost)
Kits:
Forestkit (paw, light)
Hailkit (paw, stone)
Sunkit (paw, pelt)
Moonkit (paw, streak)
Quietkit (paw, voice)
Whitekit (paw)
Riverclan:
Leader: Lizardstar
Deputy: Turtleback (star)
Medicine cat: Rosethorn –apprentice- Riverpaw
Warriors:
Waterstep
Sharktooth
Fishbait
Cinderstone
Raggedpelt
Palefur
Lightshadow
Mudbelly
Redspot
Bluewind
Queens:
Honeyflower
Goldencloud
Silvermist
Apprentices:
Riverpaw (rain)
Shrewpaw (nose)
Nightpaw (pelt)
Dreampaw (box)
Kits:
Shadowkit (paw, stream)
Scarykit (paw, moon)
Fernkit (paw, whisker)
Spottedpaw (paw, cloud)
Stonekit (paw, pelt)
Leader: Fadingstar
Deputy: Darkwing (star)
Medicine cat: Blackherb –apprentice- Emberpaw
Warriors:
Redshard
Weaselnose
Nighttalon
Onyxriver
Brokeneyes
Rageflight
Stainedsoul
Redmark
Shatteredlight
Silvernight
Wolfclaw
Queens:
Poppyheart
Flamefur
Apprentices:
Emberpaw (claw)
Leafpaw (mask)
Downpaw (fall)
Tornpaw (web)
Kits:
Littlekit (paw,soul)
Ravenkit (paw, moon)
Smallkit (paw, shard)
Prologue – “Greyeyes’? What is it? What can you see?” A young apprentice asked the old grey tom, the apprentice was named Chickenpaw because of how scared he always was, the old grey cat named Greyeyes looked down upon the white and brown colored, Chickenpaw, “I see only what Starclan let’s me” The old cat answered his pale green eyes peered down at the apprentice, “Look beyond the eyes of others, for Fire's time has pasted, with the help of Wind, Thunder, Shadow, River, and Sky she will lead the 10 other's into the storm of wings lead by the Red, who will only be defeated at the paws of Wild.” He recited the words Starclan had told him, the apprentices eyes widened slightly, “What does that mean?” he questioned, “It means we have to let the other’s know, and soon, there will be a gathering in three sunfalls, we will tell them about it then, I am curious to know if anyone else has had the vision yet” he said, Chickenpaw looked down, “I haven’t” he said, “Don’t worry Chickenpaw you will one day” He said, “Starclan blesses us all, and we must accept the fate we have been given” He said, “Now let’s tell Silverstar of our little discovery shall we?” he asked, Chickenpaw yelped and then nodded, “Okay” he said sheepishly, the two cats left the medicine cat’s den off to warn his fellow class mates of the vision he had seen.
Summary- The prophesy states that there is a new chosen one, and that she is to save the clans, and they're home. But she isn't all that's excepted, even though she's stronger, and a better hunter then any Thunderclan cat, faster then any Windclan cat, swim faster and catch fish better then any Riverclan cat, stealthier, more stubborn then any Shadowclan cat, jump higher and climb trees better then any Skyclan cat, and wise beyond those in Starclan, and even the Tribe of rushing water. But even with all these amazing skills that she had, she is just small kitten and seems really quite weak, not anything that they would have excepted, but Thunderclan takes her in and trains her like those of Starclan asked, but that is going to be harder then they thought. Not only must they train her they must also find the ten other’s that are going to help her with the task that has been placed before her, but that is going to be incredibly hard considering they are all apprentices!!
Clan list:
Thunderclan:
Leader: Silverstar
Deputy: Thundercloud (star)
Medicine cat: Greyeyes –apprentice- Chickenpaw
Warriors:
Blacktooth
Iceface
Dustear
Skyveiw
Clouddragon
Brightpelt
Owlfern
Hiddenstrike
Fadedglass
Queens:
Shadowdancer
Willowbranch
Dapplespot
Apprentices:
Poppypaw (heart)
Chickenpaw (wing)
Starpaw (night)
Smokepaw (fur)
Darkpaw (mask)
Kits:
Wildkit (paw, song, star)
Runningkit (paw, shadow)
Tigerkit (paw, nose)
Snowkit (paw, shoe)
Winterkit (paw, pelt)
Crowkit (paw, fur)
Windclan:
Leader: Fallenstar
Deputy: Hoperiver (star)
Medicine cat: Windstorm –apprentice- Rainpaw
Warriors:
Falcondrop
Farhills
Halfear
Spiritlight
Redwhisker
Iceraven
Jetstorm
Evercomet
Molestone
Sockmist
Queens:
Flowerwing
Windbreeze
Blackthunder
Apprentices:
Heavypaw (step)
Rainpaw (drop)
Blue (hill)
Willowpaw (print)
Later: Hollypaw (frost)
Kits:
Forestkit (paw, light)
Hailkit (paw, stone)
Sunkit (paw, pelt)
Moonkit (paw, streak)
Quietkit (paw, voice)
Whitekit (paw)
Riverclan:
Leader: Lizardstar
Deputy: Turtleback (star)
Medicine cat: Rosethorn –apprentice- Riverpaw
Warriors:
Waterstep
Sharktooth
Fishbait
Cinderstone
Raggedpelt
Palefur
Lightshadow
Mudbelly
Redspot
Bluewind
Queens:
Honeyflower
Goldencloud
Silvermist
Apprentices:
Riverpaw (rain)
Shrewpaw (nose)
Nightpaw (pelt)
Dreampaw (box)
Kits:
Shadowkit (paw, stream)
Scarykit (paw, moon)
Fernkit (paw, whisker)
Spottedpaw (paw, cloud)
Stonekit (paw, pelt)
Leader: Fadingstar
Deputy: Darkwing (star)
Medicine cat: Blackherb –apprentice- Emberpaw
Warriors:
Redshard
Weaselnose
Nighttalon
Onyxriver
Brokeneyes
Rageflight
Stainedsoul
Redmark
Shatteredlight
Silvernight
Wolfclaw
Queens:
Poppyheart
Flamefur
Apprentices:
Emberpaw (claw)
Leafpaw (mask)
Downpaw (fall)
Tornpaw (web)
Kits:
Littlekit (paw,soul)
Ravenkit (paw, moon)
Smallkit (paw, shard)
Prologue – “Greyeyes’? What is it? What can you see?” A young apprentice asked the old grey tom, the apprentice was named Chickenpaw because of how scared he always was, the old grey cat named Greyeyes looked down upon the white and brown colored, Chickenpaw, “I see only what Starclan let’s me” The old cat answered his pale green eyes peered down at the apprentice, “Look beyond the eyes of others, for Fire's time has pasted, with the help of Wind, Thunder, Shadow, River, and Sky she will lead the 10 other's into the storm of wings lead by the Red, who will only be defeated at the paws of Wild.” He recited the words Starclan had told him, the apprentices eyes widened slightly, “What does that mean?” he questioned, “It means we have to let the other’s know, and soon, there will be a gathering in three sunfalls, we will tell them about it then, I am curious to know if anyone else has had the vision yet” he said, Chickenpaw looked down, “I haven’t” he said, “Don’t worry Chickenpaw you will one day” He said, “Starclan blesses us all, and we must accept the fate we have been given” He said, “Now let’s tell Silverstar of our little discovery shall we?” he asked, Chickenpaw yelped and then nodded, “Okay” he said sheepishly, the two cats left the medicine cat’s den off to warn his fellow class mates of the vision he had seen.
